Monday, August 21

A Scary Monster

Once upon a time there lived a very mean monster who had tiger's eyes, he was very cruel just like a tiger. He killed many people and destroyed many villagers. He had friends just like him, his friends were like brothers to him soon they became a gang. His friends were as cruel as he was and they ate many people. One day all his friends were caught and he became very kind after he heard the news, he became so kind so that the police would not catch him too.

Done by: Jeremy Tan
Class: P1D1/1K
Year:1997



Yep, I actually wrote that

1 Comments:

At 3:52 pm, Blogger le radical galoisien said...

Heh, a lot of people I know seem to be posting their old compositions recently ... is it because they're digging up stuff to study?

It looks quite good compared to the average American first grader, no mistakes.

I'm actually trying to map true language development ... (not according to syllabus, because that always tends to represent a lower portion) ... like when we started using compound tenses and subjunctive moods .... it's actually sort of funny, one doesn't think about all that consciously until study another Indo-European language like French.

 

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